Can someone help me revise this or fix it a little

So I'm trying to find the right words to write and I'm stuck

"It sucks when all you can do is think about one person, and you know that’s all it will ever be"-me

anything would be appreciated
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johndoe116
Or maybe to simplify... I am happy each day I spend with you. When I'm not with you, I remember your laugh, your smile and allow myself to dream. If all I can ever have is my dream of us I can live with it. In truth, I want to do more than live with a dream, I want to live. I want to do more than hear your laugh, I want to see you giggle. Take a chance with me, help me live out-loud. Giggle with me, cry with me, behave poorly with me, pout with me, sing with me.
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MyUknownName
My happiest thoughts are of me with you. My saddest thoughts are a few moments later when I once again realize that hope does not necessarily predict reality.

I want to believe in hope, I want to live in a a world where a true, honest and sincere desire to know someone has potential. Help me realize the potential of hope. I don't want to be cynical, convert me. Make me a believer.
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MyUknownName
I dont know but i like it so far!
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Ileana