Goodnight little baby...

Hi little baby, why do you cry,
'because I wish to die'

'the scars on my body haunt my dreams,
They let me know people hate me'

'I wish to be loved, cuddled, and cared,
But no one does, no, they wouldn't dare'

'how could they love someone with scars,
That's right they wouldn't not by far'

'no one loves me no one cares
No one thinks about my fears'

'I act like I'm happy loved and cared,
But no one cares for someone so scarce'

'so tonight I lay with a silver blade,
To slice across the open vein'

Goodnight little baby, you have now died,
But I'm sry to say no one cried...
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DieScreaming
Lol I was actually listening to screamo when I wrote this so....idk my cuz was with me and he was all depressed and it just fit together but glad u like it anywayz
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DieScreaming
For some reason I think of metallica - enter sandman even though that goes in a different direction.

Perhaps this what you wrote would work well as a Metal tune.

Anyway , I think it's good.
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TheDevil
Seems silly to be so worked up over this, don't you think?
Yeah and you need to STFU cause ur getting on my last damn nerve
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DieScreaming
You're getting defensive again.
Okay one dont call me emotionally unstable again cause I'm not

This poem was simply something I wrote when I was pissed and people around me were mad

Second yes I'm a little unstable sometimes but that doesn't mean shit

And toxic lullaby was right about me getting defensive when u saud u hated it but gave no reason for hating it

Lastly if u call someone emotionally unstable that usually means u r so I'd watch what u say before u piss the wrong plp off
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DieScreaming
If I'm the queen of cunts, you definitely haven't had much contact with people.
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ToxicLullaby
If expressing my opinion makes me a dick, you must be the queen of cunts.
Actually, I'd say both. You were a straight dick, they are probably a little unstable. But it's not like some bitch on here who is 24 and thinks itsnormal to set up a tent on her front porch to camp by herself and cut off communication from everyone until she decides to go back inside.
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ToxicLullaby
I think more likely they got defensive because they are emotionally unstable.

I mean, did you read the same poem I did? It's pretty awful and the reasons why are evident.

Maybe the reason why it seems like no one cares about them because they get this defensive about every tiny piece of actual or perceived criticism and push people away.

Loneliness and depression are a cycle. It has clear steps to its culmination.
Because you didn't give any reason why you hate it or how it could be better, you made it offensive and wonder why they got defensive. Durr.
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ToxicLullaby
You seem to take criticism very personally.

I criticized your work, not you.

We're having a conversation. I hope I could enlighten you to a few things.
If u don't like my writing why r u still on my page?...
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DieScreaming
Why insult me, then?
Good for you dickweed I could care less if u like it or hate it
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DieScreaming
I hate it.