http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/The right place to post your secrets. Hey caitlin. That might sound creepy except its catrina writing this so Im allowed to creeperize on you. I knew when I read the first line it was you writing it because thats one of my favoritelines... http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14306996 17 Sep 2008 19:54:00 +0000 Ap4ever You are an amazing writer. I am a writer and am working on a book right now. I love your symbolism and the personifications you use throughout the entire poetic story you have written. It pleases me... http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305289 02 Aug 2008 20:01:00 +0000 Poster Thank you all, so much. You don't know how much it made me smile to read all of your comments :) http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305281 02 Aug 2008 17:27:00 +0000 Joti I really didn't think i would read all that i honestly think it's amazing. "I was fully awake last night when I dreamt I heard you tap on my window." seriously, amazing. :) http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305259 02 Aug 2008 07:11:00 +0000 SKRATCH! OMG! I fricken love it! I had pictures flashing through my mind. http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305236 02 Aug 2008 02:27:00 +0000 Poster Thank you, I really appreciate that. Lol, I'm usually a nutjob about using proper grammar and things like that, but I decided not to capitalize in the poem hehe Thanks again :) http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305231 01 Aug 2008 23:08:00 +0000 Penguin It's like the stream of consciousness type of poetry. I think it's pretty good except, well, I'm a stickler for proper grammar. But that's not really my call. (: http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305229 01 Aug 2008 20:54:00 +0000 Bliss It was very good, but there was many things going on that I got a bit confused. That might just be me, though. Also I like how you described everything. ^_^ http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-a-truthful-answer-not-just-an-obligation/14301992/#c14305225 01 Aug 2008 19:25:00 +0000