http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-to-write-plz-tell-me-if-they-suck/14302269/The right place to post your secrets. I like the parts of your song, images you create; like - "here stands the lonely star" for example. You need to work on rhyme, and some other things, but you have it. And I just know when someone... http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-to-write-plz-tell-me-if-they-suck/14302269/#c14306229 25 Aug 2008 03:13:00 +0000 Wow! You are very talented. These are very moving to me. Keep writing, you have a gift. http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-to-write-plz-tell-me-if-they-suck/14302269/#c14306221 25 Aug 2008 00:58:00 +0000 I think it's great. You're a terrific writer. Keep it up. =] http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/i-want-to-write-plz-tell-me-if-they-suck/14302269/#c14306218 25 Aug 2008 00:08:00 +0000