What do you think??

Posted by missclosed on 2/21/2010 12:03:00 AM (Report abuse)

Laying upon tangled sheets
Craving your kiss
How its always pure bliss
The heat of passion is rising
As your body presses against mine
Your fingers stroking my skin
With force of shared desire
Kissing me seductively
Our lips and tongue entwine
Pushing me over the fragile edge

Gentle whispers streaming through the air
Holding my hips without care
Looking into my eyes
As we spin into the depths of lust
As our bodies rise
The feeling of sanity and penetrating
Is taking me to a higher place
Within your loving embrace

** How do you like it..I just got done writing it..I wanted to write something seductive about my love affair! ! How did I do???***

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missclosed,

if you're going to do that from now on, I will shut up. Thanks.

JaneyGirlRed:

Hey, retarded piece of fuck, I love people with original creativity. That's the whole fucking point. I've offered anyone who wants to see, with quotes and all, the lines in this poem that don't seem to be authentic and seem to be reproduced. Can't work a simple Google search, can you? Well, I'm not wiping your dumb ass for you by handing over links where I've found them. They are there. Find them your fucking self if you want to see why I'm accusing missclosed for feigning authenticity. I doubt you'll actually care enough to lift a finger and do it, though.

Posted by Secretstalker on 2/21/2010 4:45:00 PM (Report abuse)

Hey secretstalker...excuse me...hey DOOSHBAG get off your fucking ego trip. Just because some people have actual creativity doesn't mean they ripped it off.

Posted by JaneyGirlRed on 2/21/2010 3:21:00 PM (Report abuse)

I did NOT find them on the internet!!! Like I said, My friend sent them to me in an e-mail.. And yes I know it is against the law.. But next time I copy and paste another I will remember to put on there that I didn't write it.. I didn't think of that.. And I did write this one BY MYSELF!!! Like I said you can believe me or not.. I can send you pictures of all the papers I used, when I was writing it..

Posted by missclosed on 2/21/2010 3:17:00 PM (Report abuse)

I'm sure Kelly Blaine wouldn't think it's nice that you led people to think that you wrote her poem and didn't just copy/paste it. Being nice would have been giving credit back to the author, or at least a link to where you found it, or at the *very* least using QUOTATION MARKS THAT SUGGEST IT ISN'T YOUR OWN WORK. If you did neither of those three, which you didn't, you suggest that it's your own creation. And, it's not. That's actually against the law, I believe. I think it's something called "copyright infringement". When someone gives you praise for what you did not create, being nice and honest would mean you saying something like "oh, I didn't write this, I just really like it", or "I know, huh? I found this on..."

And, as for the rest of this poem, who knows. It seems like you could have written it yourself. I haven't found evidence to the contrary, but the one line that I mentioned is still almost exactly a line from someone else's creation. Anyone can search and see for themself. You can call it a coincidence that it's so similar, but seeing as you've copied other poems before without credit, I have my doubts, as anyone might.

Posted by Secretstalker on 2/21/2010 2:27:00 PM (Report abuse)

I never said I wrote the 2 poems that says: "feelings" or "touching a dream" I got them sent to me in an e-mail by my friend and I liked them so I posted.. And where I said thank you on the feelings one.. I just said it to be nice.. And as far as this one goes.. I really did write this one myself.. You can believe me or not.. I don't care.. Because I know for a fact that I DID write this one..

Posted by missclosed on 2/21/2010 1:39:00 PM (Report abuse)

Oh, did I say you deleted the secret called "Feelings"? My mistake. It's still there, in all of it's plagiarizing glory. Love how you go ahead and accept praise for it:

http://www.secrettalk.com/secrets/feelings/14336370/

Posted by Secretstalker on 2/21/2010 12:59:00 PM (Report abuse)

Oh, I'm sorry. It wasn't exactly word for word, was it? It was a little difficult for me to be as careful while I was using the Internet on an iPod.

The original goes like this:

"Gentle whispers streaming through the air
While I hold your hips dreaming without a care."

It's unclear who the author of this one is. It's almost exactly the same, but not quite, is it? Kind of an incredible coincidence, I'm sure, but several other things you've posted haven't been. This includes a secret which you titled "Feelings", which was actually a poem called "Silent Screams: The Unheard Jews of 1943" written by Kelly Blaine. This secret is now deleted, of course, but your secret "Touching a Dream" still remains. You don't actually take credit for that poem, I realize, but you also don't acknowledge that it isn't yours, nor do you list the source from which you copied it. But, you're not alone there. Several people have claimed "Touching a Dream" as their own, as it seems to be popular.

Posted by Secretstalker on 2/21/2010 12:49:00 PM (Report abuse)

I didn't not rip any of this off..

Posted by missclosed on 2/21/2010 10:55:00 AM (Report abuse)

Well, you blatently ripped this part off from an actual poet, word for word:

"gentle whispers streaming through the air
Holding my hips without care"

You stole this! AKA: You did not write this. I'm not going to be bothered looking up how much more of this has also been stolen. Maybe next time. But how many times are there going to be until you stop shamelessly ripping off other people's original creatons?